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7/24/08


Sweet amber eyes, your heart runs dry.
So sweet it hurts, so nice it aches and stings and lights and burns to dust.
Sad sunset eyes, in hazy pools of fashioned white and dry, soft dust.
So sweet it hurt, so nice it ached and stung and lit and burned to ash.
Black cobalt eyes, your words run back in lines of red as dark as velvet.
So sweet it'll hurt, so nice you'll ache and sting and catch light then burn away.
It was so hard to hold.
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I really like this one a lot. I think I wrote this one during my creative writing class as well.
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~jessicaconk Feb 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
i really like this one, too
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~sparkbearer Feb 14, 2009  Student Photographer
Thanks :)
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~einnobztron Jan 2, 2009  Student Writer
brilliant job
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~sparkbearer Jan 2, 2009  Student Photographer
Thank you :)
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~einnobztron Jan 2, 2009  Student Writer
;) you're very welcome
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=Jerepasaurus Jan 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconpaeloketh: I cant explain how it makes me think...
But I think I should leave part of david with it...so here are his eyes to view what you have given to all of us to see.
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~sparkbearer Jan 1, 2009  Student Photographer
:) Hmmm I wonder what heee thinks.
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=Jerepasaurus Jan 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I think hes admiring of its depth...and considers it quietly until he understands it fully.:)
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~sparkbearer Jan 1, 2009  Student Photographer
Come to think of it now, I forgot why I wrote this and what it means....so feel free to insert your own meaning.
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=Jerepasaurus Jan 3, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
X3
We shall.:aww:
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