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3/10/09


Here I am in the old world
banished from the new
came looking for a legend

a memory I found.
For so old was this world, I find
that none were still around

and quietly, I starred around
then slowly my eyes wept
alone I was to always be
beneath a heart well kept.
I know you guys probably don't want to see more poetry but I wrote this just today.

Enjoy if you can.
PS: I'll have some photos up on flickr soon. My aunt's gift shop is going out of business and she gave me this gorgeous 3 foot long wooden fairy statue. She's all covered in glitter and fabric, and she's very real-like, it's spooky.
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:icontwistedknightmare:
TwistedKnightmare Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009
I like your poetry.
It's nice =)
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sparkbearer Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thanks :)
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:icontwistedknightmare:
TwistedKnightmare Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009
Are you there?
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:iconsparkbearer:
sparkbearer Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009  Professional Photographer
Sorry, wasn't feeling well last night and had to log off early.
You can use the photo, remember to credit appropriately :)
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:icontwistedknightmare:
TwistedKnightmare Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009
Thank you! =) <3
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2009
i really liked this; i do think you'd write better without rhymes, though. [then again, i am extremely biased, haha]
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sparkbearer Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2009  Professional Photographer
I hate rhymes a lot of the time so I think you're right :D
My free verse stuff is much better.
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2009
haha, same! i have the opinion that rhymes restrict the thoughts you're trying to get out...and honestly, trying to write just what you're thinking is hard enough without trying to make your words adhere to a specific pattern. [hah, hope you weren't looking for someone to tell you that rhyming is the best thing on the planet :P]
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sparkbearer Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2009  Professional Photographer
Oh no I know what you mean :D
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KatTragique Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. :D
..I actually tried to sing it (wth!) it came out kinda cute hahaha
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